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Love is when you can't stop thinking about them,
when you hear their voice inside your head.
You can tell it's them just by their scent.
When you want a picture of just the two of you,
so they can always "be with you".

Love is when you call them
just to talk about anything; just to hear their voice.
When you worry about them if something happens,
when they cheer you up by giving you a hug
or just staying by your side.

Love is being able to read their eyes.
You can see when they're happy,
and help them when they're sad.
When you don't need to talk to each other,
because your eyes talk for the two of you.

Heartbreak is when you cry
because you can't stop thinking about them.
When you wish you had a picture
just to be able to say "that was us..."

Heartbreak is when you miss their phone calls
and their warm random hugs.
When both know you miss the other
Just because of the pain in your eyes.

Love is having, heartbreak is missing.
[31th POTY] As far as I'm concerned...these are my definitions for love and heartbreak...
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ancientsoulshadows Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is lovely. I feel the person I've loved for a long time is moving from me towards someone else. It's devastating. Your poem has made me cry, but I need to. Thank you. 
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ShayShay03 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
I agree with you completely. I've recently felt both and am still dealing with the second.
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muddyprints Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
Beautiful, perfect x
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blackwolf5496 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautifully written..
and i just took a break from my boyfriend of 3 years..so this really hit home.... im crying as i type this..
thanks for writing this
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome. I'm sorry for your sorrow.
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blackwolf5496 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
im better now. it really helps to have great friends to help :)
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lightningmaster2001 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Someone I'm in love with is causing me heartbreak
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Grimstmord Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. x(
Makes me cry...
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animegumballmachine Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Heartbreak IS missing...I'm missing someone terribly....
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smiley-face-gamer Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is magnificent. I love it. :+favlove:
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hammyelephant1225 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
wow this is perfect
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BubblegumCharmander Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Wow... I love thiss!!! It's amazing. so true.
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Gordissimo Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it. The worst situation I've ever been in is one I'm in now - My best friend for the last 3 years (who I've always had a thing for) came to visit me at uni. He stayed a night longer than he was going to and on the second night we kissed. It was wish fulfillment but when we stopped and realised what we'd done it was awful. He told his girlfriend and she forgave him but I'm hardly able to talk to him anymore, she hates me and won't let him. I lost more than I ever thought I could because we're miles apart and I don't know what's happening in his head, but I'm going mental. Sorry, this poem just brought it all out, it's very, very good.
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magicanimegurl Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so deep it hurts! I feel like that with the first guy I let close to my heart...
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random-creativity Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011   Traditional Artist
This is spot on.
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princess-emelina Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
I love this. It's so true.
Heartbreak is so bloody awful :(
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vivienami Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
drowning in tears at the moment but this is soo true.
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achsi Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011
This is what me and my best friend had. So why does he just not believe that this love could have been possible? How would he describe love?
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irishld2010 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
i love it.
still going through it :(
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AliaLewis Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
so tru...just went through it
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sicksargent11 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010
Why is all this aimed towards a guy screwing her up? guys like me have hearts to ruined by women and there aint a damn thing i can do about it..... women are just as bad as guys remember that
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I see where you are coming from and I do not disagree at all. I know how awful women can be. While I did write this poem about a guy, it is not necessarily only men that it can be aimed at.
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sicksargent11 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
oh ok.. well im sorry i was just in a really bad mood that day when i posted that. i was just very heartbroken at the time when i saw it.
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
It is okay. We have all been there. I hope you are better now. :)
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sicksargent11 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
i am... but no one can ever get 100% un-heartbroken till new love i think
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Mizuki-Anya Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
they are better than any dictionary definition.
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you much!
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NOM-RAWR Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
beautiful... you've got real talent in writing
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. :D

Unfortunately I have fallen into a bit of a rut for the time being. :(
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GalacticKitten Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
So true. =(
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Witch-Child-manga Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010
I can definately relate to this at the moment... I happened to lose to a barbie... it was painful... well.. IS painful I should say.
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the fact that you call them a Barbie. :) It's nice to know I'm not the only one who calls them that. <3
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Witch-Child-manga Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
Haha, it came to my head immediatly when I saw the way she acted. :) I thought I was alone too! I'm glad we share that in common. <3
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Koori-Sempai Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
This is true....I loved someone, and my ex bff (not the reason shes an ex bff) tore us apart, cause she was his friend, and...well. he believeed her lies, and now...Ive been replaced by him, he replaced me so quickly... (a double blow, my dog died shortly after, I had him since 2nd grade.) :(
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs* My sympathy is with you my dear.
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Koori-Sempai Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
:hug: ok...
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
So perfect. The boy I was suppose to spend forever with , jsut broke up with me. His reason? I'm to good for him.
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Well at least he knows the truth hun.
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SarahTriceratops Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
haha so true
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Enchanted-Moon Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Beautiful and perfect.
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Merci beaucoup.
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Zexionlover666 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
He asked me to marry him. I said yes. I was his everything. He's broken my heart twice since then...(more if you count every day since we broke up)....once by breaking up with me...and once by not taking me back. He's my best friend......

And I love him with all my heart.
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs* Aww you poor thing!! What a jerk. :( I really really do hope you find someone good enough for you that'll be better than him.
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Zexionlover666 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
Me too. But for the time being..he's my best friend and even when I'm still crying over him..he always manages to call me and make me laugh. He never knows that I'm crying though.
*hugs*
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ElvenAngel81 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009
It's really really good. I read this.. And it reminded me of the ultimate blow I've ever taken to my heart.. Just on Tuesday.... I loved him soooo much...

But one thing I can't say about this heartbreak.. I miss him.. EVERYONE sees the pain in my eyes.. But him. And I doubt he misses me as much as I do him. I doubt he hurts as much as I do :( Life can suck sometimes...
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that feeling. That exact scenario is what made me write this poem. Oddly enough, about half a year after I wrote it he came back to me. I had the feeling long before I wrote it out though. Things will work out in the end. It may not be what you want right now, but eventually you'll either get what you want, or find something better. (In my case, I found something better)
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ElvenAngel81 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2009
Hehe, yeah.. I hope I do.. I really really wanted him though. :( He just fed me some sugar coated lies..

I found out he's in another relationship.. ALREADY! He barely gave me one day...

It's ruining my life, the break-up... I'm trying to not let it happen.. But it is. I can't do anything anymore without thinking of him :(
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
*hugs* Hang in there hun. Even though you maybe don't want to hear it, he's clearly not good enough for you. You'll find someone better and everything will work out.
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ElvenAngel81 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009
Yup, I hope so.. My friends are all putting me on blind dates.. Or more one of them :( It's not helping.. But one of the guys were really really sweet to me.. He seemed gay though. I dunno. Anyway... I did do some thinking, and found that if he wants to go to her, then it's his loss, in a way. He was happy with me, but if he thinks he's happier with her, then I'll let him go, but I'm not taking him back.(though it is SO tempting to)
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Sucre-Glace-Reine Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Whatever you think is best dear. I wish you the best of luck. Please keep me updated.
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