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I used to laugh when people said
"I've found my love, my only one"
I shook my head and then I said
"You silly fool, love is dead"
but now I can clearly see
that all along the fool was me.
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"Now I'm a believer"..

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Perhpas change the last line to 'the fool was me all along' because then it rhymes with 'one' instead of 'see'. Maybe change it up to wear you have an abaabb sort of rhyming scheme, it might be interesting. Good flow to this one. Short and sweet.

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A poem is a naked person... Some people say that I am a poet.
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